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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

the boys messing chocolate

Once upon a time there was a boy that couldn't find his chocolate that he brought at the shop he went around the house but he couldn’t find the chocolate. He asked his mum where she thought it was but she had no clue where it was. He looked high and low but it was no where to be seen. So he decided to go on a hunt to find a block of chocolate. We jumped in his mums car and headed to the closest store. As soon as he got there he ran to the closest worker and asked if he had chocolate mint chocolate the man said no but we have other kinds but that wasn't good enough for the little boy. So they headed to the next store. He went into the next store and asked the same thing “Do you have any chocolate mint chocolate but that store had none too. The little boy went store to store to try find chocolate mint chocolate but there was  still no luck. The little boy went home very sad and didnt come out of his room for the rest of the night. He later on went to bed. When the little boy woke up the next morning he saw chocolate mint chocolate laying on the end of his bed, the little boy had never been so happy in his life it made his mum smile.

2 comments:

  1. Wow Blake, what a lovely ending to the story. I was worried that the little boy was going to stay being sad without his chocolate!

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  2. yea it was a close one

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