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Monday, December 2, 2019

poem

Travellers walking in the scorching sun, 
No shade of a wide spreading tree. 
When they rested they looked up and saw that it was a star.
So they walked away and didn’t look back And when they got to Tibet it was dark 
And even the moon didn’t shine 
Soon they found out the sun quit because there were no offerings.

The end.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Blake,
    I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    Mrs O'Donnell

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