we had to edit one of are old pieces of writing and I chose my Valhalla research which you can see the newly uploaded Valhalla research if you scroll down on my blog and these is what I did

here is the old non edited Valhalla all good right that's were your wrong it needs a hole lot of editing

 Daily price is 300$ no matter what if you brig 1000 or 1 person it will still 300$ here is what there is at Valhalla there is a lake there is a playground there is a beach there is 3 Mountains and a huge lake that you can fish at there is a bush that you can go on a walk at there is to fields a wood shed to fire places a mini school 7 bedrooms 3 shows one bath 4 toilets and it has 8 fridges and a kitchen and a dishwasher to ovens the washing machine and the outside is huge

And 5 canoes you can bring your dogs and the house is huge to 4 couches and 4 tables

here is the finished Valhalla research the red words are the changes and the red words with these - in it means that I deleted it. this is the finished product 

Valhalla

Daily price is 300$ no matter what if you bring 1000 people or 1 person it will still be 300$ here is what there is at valhalla. There is a lake, there is a playground, there is a beach there is 3 Mountains and a huge lake that you can go fishing at. There is a bush that you can go on a walk a-t there is t-o 2 fildes a wood shed t-o 2 fireplaces and a mini school. 7 bedrooms 3 shows o-n-e 1 bath 4 toilets and it has 8 fridges and a kitchen.when you go in there is -a- dish-wash-er t-o 2 ovens the washing machine and the outside is huge. A-nd- 5 can-oes and you can bring your dogs and the house is huge too. It has 4 couches and 4 tables

Valhalla